Where sacrifice is the New Fusion
Where inner silence produces all outward movements
Where all fragments of the World are felt like our own bodily cells
Where mass self destroys for gaining energy
Where living in Flow is all that matters
Where all of the intellect is discarded for just living a moment
Where becoming heavy is appearing light
Where bigger the challenges, exciting becomes the journey
Where you do not try to create but witness the creation happening
Where all complex things disintegrate and show a continuum of moving ever-changing expanse
Where breath slows down almost to speed zero
Where happiness wells up, sinking in the wells of worldly detachment
Where automatic balance exists between the good and bad
Where you are intrinsically compact and moving in all directions
Into that realm of Reality, God, let me dwell and operate..
~Lt Col S K Taggar (Retd)
Mohali, India
Nice
Poignant…..leads to search within one’s own memories ..to dispel the painful parts…and rejoice in life itself
Nice 🙏🏼
Fabulous 👌
Very nice thoughts. Extremely inspiring.
Very well written. A lot is conveyed in these few lines.
Very nice poem👌
Sanjeev
May your words spread goodness amongst the masses and bring them inner peace and restfulness.
Best,
A lovely message in the poetic outburst of the writer. He has beautifully juxtaposed the present harsh reality with the altruistic world aspired by the learned. A message of hope and also showing the path like a beacon. SK Taggar you have the flair to ignite the imagination for that elusive but yet achievable world order. Looking forward to more from you.
The content of the poem is as sacred as a prayer. Remarkable writing ✍️
Wow Taggy , finally you are letting your pen flow 👍
Meaningful composition. It makes so much more sense everytime I read. Great job bro.
Hello Sanjeev, very nicely written and every word of it speaks the reality of our present day.
Wonderful poem seeking transition to a meaningful living. Best wishes to Col Taggar and hope more of his poems gets published for masses to read and enjoy.
Sanjeev, It’s very nice poem interaction between body mind and external activity related to a human soul to the universe. Keep up your thoughts in poetic expression. Regards
Profound in subject and expression. Liked it.
Awesome. Splendid composition.
True inspiration for merging into the creator …
Beautifully worded and the essence of life to be lived daily is poetically conveyed. Your thoughts are unique.
Beautiful.
Deep depth seen in you through your prayers brother. Revolutionary thinker appears to be emerging in society today.
All the best.
Very well written, the blissful journey inwards & expanding into the cosmos, to the creator.
Very nicely expressed…. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👌👌👌👌
So good papa
Beautiful message with deep meaning! Lines just touched my heart!
Good thoughts. Keep it up
Great…keep it up. All the best
Into the depth, the words dwell. Beautifully expressed . Looking forward to more such meaningful expressions.
Deep Thoughts
That’s expressing your feelings truly to God. You are talking to God through your poem.
A real modern prayer. Beautifully expressed.
Very nice and deep thoughts, conveyed a lot.
Blissful is the world if we find it thus. Great effort bro. Keep going
I sincerely hope that such a prayer could ever become a reality except in a dreamy state or feelings that could be possessed only by Godly souls! A feeling that may be felt transiently after waking up from a dreamy state!
A momentous train of thoughts that were never expressed before! Very well written Sir!
Thank you so much friends …Feel so blessed to have you all in my life..Any writer’s quest is the learning that happens through various comments.You all have been very generous with your feelings and blessings….Thank you so much once again ..each one of you for your comments or views..Warm regards 🙏
Intense and profound thoughts.
Nice
Profound is the word which first came to my mind after I read it. A lot of emotional depth and intellectually penetrative creation. Keep writing buddy. Touched. Will have to re-read to grasp the complete essence of this lovely composition.
Ironies of life ,
Great Poem.