When I think of the journey taken thus far,I wonder if I have done it wisely.My thoughts need a conscious bath instantly,Before all my expectations rise above the bar.What is stored in my star,And what defines my life’s achievement is unknown widely.My mind can’t fathom anything holy,When I don’t really knoweth the calls that comes from afar.Though far, let me walk slowly,But I must travel guided by my Northstar,Before everyone falls asleep.I have traveled thus far solely,Taking my own soul and body in war,With consciousness awakened from sleep.
~Yeshi Nidup
Phuentsholing, Bhutan
Interesting concept Yeshi. You should work on developing this further. You could end up with an epic poem!
Thank you Mike A for your wonderful comment.