Poetry

Wonderful Creation

tap in the back

heard the last cry

a new life was born

the window of the soul opened

a glimpse of an eye

senses worked

from sole to crown

a pleasing sight to behold.

 

in its innermost being

body organs were placed

interdependent to each other

controlled and directed by the brain

blood, blood vessels, veins and capillaries

given life by the powerful heart

all were perfectly orchestrated

and placed in an artistic manner.

no brilliant inventions

could perfectly match

this wonderful creation

beauteous beyond imagination

rational beyond comparison

created in His image

 most loved of all creation

gave HIS life to save them.

time is now

for you to behold and appreciate

how perfectly you were created

love yourself as you love thy Creator

live your life with purpose

a well-lived life is

giving back the glory and praises

FOR MAKING YOU

THE MOST WONDERFUL CREATION

                                                      ~ Dr. Luzviminda Rivera

                                                                                                              Tarlac Province, Philippines

15 Comments

  1. “live your life with purpose

    a well-lived life is

    giving back the glory and praises”
    This would be my favorite part?
    Nice one ma’am. Keep on writing ?

  2. Thank you so much ading Charie Mae..

    Yes as long as there are people like you who appreciate and is inspired by my writing.

    God bless…

  3. Thanks for this poem madam, I was reminded how loved I am by Our creator?? more power!

  4. This is worth reading?

  5. Lets be thankful and be in peace

  6. Enjoy the life that God give to us ☺️ Thank you mam

  7. Enjoy the life that God give to us ☺️ Thank you doc

  8. Enjoy the life that God give to us ☺️ Thank you doc

    God Bless!

    • Luzviminda G. Rivera

      Thank you Mam Vangie and Sir Zaldy.

      Yeah, we should always the gift of life Mam Vangie and Sir Zaldy, enjoy your gift of writing poetry.

      God bless

  9. Thank you so much for Ysa, Josephine and Angelica for your comments.
    Thank you also for inspiring me in return.

    Indeed, we are wonderfully created.

  10. Zaldy facun perez

    I love the poem it drives my inner passion to write a poem again,SUPERB!

  11. Thank you so much for the appreciation, Mam Vangielyn and Sir Zaldy.

    Thank you for inspiring me also.

    God bless us always..

  12. Thank you maam for reminding us how great is our Lord Jesus Christ. ♥️
    Thank you for sharing your poem. ?

  13. Madam Angela ,

    Thank you for the appreciation.
    Yeahhh, the Lord is great.
    Greater than we think

    God bless..

  14. Such a wonderful and inspiring poem. Keep it up Mam Luz.