Unfriend

It all started with a simple hi and hello

Greetings every morning feel halo

Sharing our thoughts and personal dreams

Spending time chatting, laughing at memes

One day romantic feelings is expressed

To the person who I know as the best

Feelings reciprocated, expected!

Until my love and quarrel entangled

Seldom hi and hello, my heart shouts booo

And wishes to see you fast like a bow

But nothing happens for the feelings grew

All my dream love were put in bin and threw

Our special friendship in virtual world

Turns like a doomy life without a word

Ones, tens, hundreds, thousands and million friends

Of that number you chose me to UNFRIEND

                                                                                  ~ John J. Flores 

170 Comments

  1. JOHN-JOHN J. FLORES says:

    the poem is nice.

  2. Clarissa Gail T. Medina says:

    ❣️

  3. Melanie Samaniego says:

    The poem is beautiful 😍❤️

  4. Melanie Samaniego says:

    The poem is beautiful❤️😍

  5. ALFRED JOHN D. GALANG says:

    This poem is Great.

  6. Joshua Charles T. Patawaran says:

    Ahhhh! It’s wonderfull poem .💓

  7. I really liked this one. Thank you for sharing.

  8. Daphnie Dayrit says:

    The message of the poem is beautiful 😍

  9. ALAINE D. PASUCAL says:

    I love this poem❤

  10. Mikee D. Celis says:

    Wonderful creation! It is nice and also a relatable poem. The poem was precisely wrote. Impressive!😍👏

  11. Alicia Cabigting Bulanhgui says:

    This poem was so amazing❤️

  12. Vanessa L. Galang says:

    The poem is woderful

  13. If I could give you one thing in life, I’d give you the ability to see yourself through my eyes, only then would you realize how special you are to me
    -Moizen
    fc! HAHAA

  14. Anna Nichole Mae A. Gopez says:

    💞💞🔥

  15. Nicole S. Cortez says:

    this is a nice poem

  16. Ciddy T. Bonifacio says:

    The poem is so nice
    I love this poem

  17. Rowena C. Villota says:

    The poem is beautiful 💓The tone of the writer and the mood of the poem were expressed genuinely.💓💓💓

  18. Ciddy T. Bonifacio says:

    Why she unfriend you sir?😅

  19. Nice, Thanks for sharing!

  20. Patricia R. Cunanan says:

    The poem is good.

  21. Cristel Joy C. Samin says:

    Nice poem and I love it. So relatable.

  22. Edwin Feliciano says:

    i love your poem <3

  23. Jamie Ann Miclat says:

    The poem is nice. Too brief yet so meaningful:>>>

  24. Charles Eishen D. Manalang says:

    I like tis poem❤️
    I’m happy to read this poem❤️
    Nice ❤️

  25. Elsie Delacruz says:

    It is an amazing poem. A sad but a true poem, the words are easy to understand and it touched every reader’s heart.

  26. Abegail Ruth V. Ramos says:

    Nice poem

  27. Roger D. De Guzman says:

    The poem is often experience in reality. That even me face that tragedy being the bestfriend turn to unfriended being the love once and turn to hated once. The poem is beautiful showing what love is.

  28. I love this poem 😍
    I’m Sad after i read the poem🥺
    Niceee 😜

  29. Michaela Baluyut says:

    Wowww nice

  30. Phrincess Nina Manuel says:

    i love this poem
    But it sad in the end
    Nice poem

  31. Wilson A. Pamintuan says:

    I like your poem.

  32. Katherine Z. Castro says:

    I love the poem. The feelings are expressed so well.

  33. Maristela Gayan says:

    The poem is about friendship, a special relationship that grew through social media. What makes it special is that the persona is able to be friends even though he’s not physically attached to that person. The poem showed how we can create friendship and eventually love that person. I felt the love he has for his friend and how he felt broke when their friendship ended.

  34. Kyril Danes S.Gatus says:

    The poem is clear and I understand it
    Though it’s sad at the end but great to read

  35. Kyril Danes S.Gatus says:

    The poem is clear and I understand it
    Though it’s sad at the end but it’s great to read

  36. Mary Grace S. Pangilinan says:

    This poem was good. Although you got hurt at the end, atleast you expressed your feelings to someone. It is okay that he/she unfriend you in that way maybe he/she is not ready yet.

  37. Patricia Quiambao says:

    love it❣️

  38. Patricia Quiambao says:

    This Poem makes me sad because I experienced that kind of situation but I love it❣️

  39. Steven Brian Canlas says:

    wow great poem i love it.

  40. the poem is nice😍💓

  41. Mikaella Francisca Quiambao says:

    The Poem is Nice but at the End I feel so Sad .

  42. Beatriz Payumo says:

    The poem is very nice and sad and often the experience in reality and tell about the thoughts to express the feelings and share personal info and spending time to him/she

  43. Beatriz Payumo says:

    The poem is very nice and sad and often the experience in reality and tell about the thoughts to express the feelings and share personal information and spending time to him/she.

  44. Mary Ann Sicat says:

    The poem is like a Reality of love it show the Romantic and ends to be being an Unfriend

  45. Mary Jane F. Torres says:

    Wow nice poem.
    I love it.

  46. Nicole Figueroa says:

    this poem gives love to the good morning but in the end give a bad the because in the end give hurts

  47. Pureza S. Llarves says:

    That’s a nice poem I had never read before. I feel the sentences of every 4stanzas and at the same time this poem reminds me of my exfriend that he doesn’t wanna talk to me.

  48. Kim Nica B. Alday says:

    This poem, it’s choose to delete a conversation, to unfriend someone, but moving on and erasing that person from your heart seems impossible.

  49. Michaela Baluyut says:

    thats a sad poem but meaningful

  50. Ciddy T. Bonifacio says:

    She makes you happy but she’s unfriend you right by your side cause you’r not the one😥

  51. Catherinelimeugenio@email.com says:

    This poem is full of emotion and this is happening in real life . For me,time will come you would know why he/she unfriend you.Just think for those good memories while you’re with him/her .

  52. Charlotte Veloso says:

    I can feel the emotion and feeling of the author. It was an amazing poem that every single words that is use to the poem marked to everyone’s heart.

  53. Abegail Ruth V. Ramos says:

    Well written. A sad poem but it made me feel satisfied. It’s a poem that every one of us can relate.

  54. Raymart Eduarte says:

    Sad but true
    I love this poem

  55. Eliza H. Alfaro says:

    I felt sad and disappointed at the same time beacuse the friendship was ruin in just a snap. Im frustrated about your friend because she didnt even bother to think about all the memories you spent together and she just simply left you behind.
    The poem was a tragic story happen often times, but in wrong doings,the poem was good the reader will surely understand it immediately, and the title was catchy.

  56. JOHN MICHAEL M. CORTEZ says:

    Wow nice poem
    I feel sad when Im reading this and this also happened to other people ,unfriend by someone you love.

  57. Elysha Angeline Macapagal says:

    The poem is verry nice it tells that using Social Medias you can find friends, you can build a relationship with other user ,you can spend time with your friends using internet. but not all the time it will be alright, time will come and you will be erase by him /her.she or he will never remember you and that the sad true of life.

  58. Regie M. Inocencion says:

    A sad poem. Every reader can relate. At first it will make you feel inlove but later on it will make you sad. But its a nice poem

  59. Mikko vicente says:

    Wow, im really stunned in this poem🙁

  60. Apple L. Sarmiento says:

    The poem is simple. When I say simple, means it is easy to understand yet the thoughts and feeling are stated in an aesthetic manner. The poem is excellently done!💙👏

  61. Edrix G. Diminsil says:

    This Creation is Great! and Nice! Every readers can Relate to this Poem!😍 Its a sad poem but it is meaningful So that I Love this😍

  62. Altea Taroma says:

    Ones, tens, hundreds, thousands and million friends

    Of that number you chose me to UNFRIEND – 💔

    Nice Poem even though its sad. Its shows the reality of love nowadays.

  63. Mikhaela Santos says:

    This poem is really good. What a great job. You are an awesome poet. Keep it up❤️

  64. Kimberly Espinosa says:

    The poem is nice

  65. Kimberly Espinosa says:

    The poem is beautiful, thanks for sharing💙

  66. Mikee Masiclat says:

    Wow! I like this poem❤

  67. Lizette Lindo says:

    aww, this poem makes me sad 😔 but it’s so good, i luv it!

  68. Mary Angeline Maglaya says:

    Nice poem although it’s heart breaking but I love it! Thank you for sharing💚

  69. Laizel V. Castro says:

    This poem is full of strong emotions that explain the one’s feeling, and it is happening in reality which is your relationsip with someone will fade if it is not a destined relationship.

  70. Ian Charles Mania says:

    every friendship always starts with a simple hello and it always ended up on being Strangers all over again. I know it is sad but that’s the reality

  71. Ian Charles Mania says:

    Every friendship starts with a simple hello and always ended up on being like a strangers. I know it is sad but that’s the reality and all the memories that you shared with each other. Suddenly fades away

  72. Zyra Basilio says:

    Its nice really. It has its history that is self explanatory. I thought its romantic pero its friends pala hahaha

  73. Mary Joy Salazar says:

    This poem suits to people nowadays who have friends and easily fall in love that causes their friendship into trash. Realistic much❤

  74. Mary Joy Salazar says:

    A very sad but a real situational poem nowadays. Realistic much❤

  75. What a beautiful poem of yours, Sir. It is awesome but it is sad. I hope this really didn’t happened to you and if so then I’m sorry. But then again it is a nice poem I felt it. Great job🧡

  76. Paula katrina F Sison says:

    I love this poem 💖

  77. Petric Tante G. Posadas says:

    Wow, what a nice poem!! It is great it made me feel sad. Good job!!

  78. Joseph E Malig says:

    I love this poem❣️

  79. Nicole Ann Galang says:

    Very meaningful poem. Sometimes you have to accept the fact that people are just temporary in your life.🌚

  80. Rowena Nucum says:

    This poem made me realize that no matter how long your friendship takes, still it will be worthless if you choose to throw it away.

  81. Raymart Eduarte says:

    This poem shows the reality of love now a days.. i felt that I’m one of a friend who unfriend 😳

  82. AMAZING!! but it’s make me sad,nice post Thank you for sharing

  83. AMAZING!! but it’s make me sad,nice post Thank you for sharing

  84. Charist Joy Soliven says:

    I like the writer the words that he used and this poem it’s very realistic and for me. This poem it talks about love for the person that you like or you love because he express his feelings well.

  85. nice post thank you for sharing

  86. Reisy Casono says:

    Nice poem, thanks for sharing! Luv it 💓

  87. Jericho D. Vergara says:

    Damn I can really relate to this poem! I felt it from my heart, I love it!! I hope that you can share more about your wonderful poems.. 💖💖

  88. Marian V.Soriano says:

    The poem is good to read. The generation today, specially the teenagers can relate to this poem because it is about a person who fell in love in a stranger who became a special person in virtual word. This poem makes me feel sad.

  89. Mary Jane G.Nucum says:

    The poem is nice
    But it’s sad at the end

  90. Its such a nice written poem i love it!

  91. Mary Ann C. Vergara says:

    I gotta admit it was a nice poem it relates a lot of people especially those people who are playing online games and yes I have a friend. I shared this poem to her and suddenly her tears came out and as a friend, I felt the emotion that she’s expressing. Anyways it was a nice poem, people might experience this and personally, I might experience this who knows.

  92. Joana Isabela Nicole M. Hererra says:

    I like the content of the poem. It’s great!

  93. Angelica Ann Salazar says:

    This poem is so nice and beautiful💯❣️

  94. Rachelle Joy Zara says:

    Oh what a wonderful poem
    I love poem so that i like it

  95. Rachelle Joy Zara says:

    This poem is really inspiring

  96. This poem is so nice and beautiful 💯❣️

  97. The poem is nice! 🖤

  98. Rachelle Joy Zara says:

    I feel you sir
    And im relate to this poem

  99. Rachelle Joy Zara says:

    Jolina May Nucum

  100. Wowww! Sirrr!😍 Nice poem, I suddenly remembered her😢

  101. Nice poem, I suddenly remembered her😢

  102. Joseph e malig says:

    Legit❣️ I love this poem❣️❣️

  103. Your poem is beautiful! It’s a yes for me😍

  104. Lander c. Liwanag says:

    That’s a great poem❤️❤️

  105. Catherine Rose Gutierrez says:

    This kind of poem is an eye opener for everyone that we’re all in reality. Reality means not everything you want, you can get. Sometimes, the something that we really want can be the something that we can’t never ever get. People will come and go in our lives and all we can do is to accept the fact that no one will stay beside you except yourself but don’t give up on love, there’s always a perfect time in everything. It’s a wonderful poem, keep it up!

  106. The poem is so realistic, its timely because somehow i can relate and I know many teens like me felt the same too. After reading the poem, memories started flashing backs on my mind. Keep writing and Godbless.

  107. Jesca Perez says:

    The poem is so nice,short but concise. It happens in real life,most of the time to millenials. Lesson learned do not expect too much from happy endings,most of the time the sad truth is there are no fairytales where they always say “and they lived happily ever after”. ❤☹️

  108. Catherine Rose Gutierrez says:

    This kind of poem is an eye opener for everyone that we’re all in reality. Reality means not everything you want, you can get. Sometimes, the something that we really want can be the something that we can’t never ever get. People will come and go in our lives and all we can do is to accept the fact that no one will stay beside you except yourself but don’t give up on love, there’s always a perfect time in everything. It’s a nice poem, keep it up!❣️

  109. Rego Madlangbayan says:

    The poem is nice

  110. Abegail L Macaspac says:

    It really reminds me about my life its so unique I love the content and really inspiring😍😍

  111. Erika Hipolito says:

    This poem is good.
    Everyone can relate.
    Teenagers nowadays experienced this.

  112. Jamie ann miclat says:

    The poem is great. Too brief yet so meaningful. I love reading it:>>>

  113. Khim Salviejo Gapas says:

    I really felt the happiness, sadness and pain collaborated touches on my heart. Aside from the profound words used by the writer it has a very catchy terminoligies that he can also used that helps you to expressed your mind to understand the real definition of this poem. As a reader, I also felt like its my experienced in life, that every single word symbolizes the experience that I’ve been encountered previously. To the writer, I will appreciate your concept and your determination to gave a lesson to your readers. Keep it Up!.

  114. Geraldine Serreon Angeles says:

    This poem is nice and beautiful💖

  115. Geraldine Serreon Angeles says:

    This poem is so nice and beautiful💖

  116. Rosalie Bonifacio says:

    I love this poem❤

  117. Jolina May M. Nucum says:

    the poem was good but a sad story and it’s hurt.

  118. Tristan Bulatao says:

    The poem is good. because it is about to a person who fell in love to her friend and became more important to her but at the last it doesn’t work This poem makes me feel sad.

  119. Mikaela Tolentino says:

    I love this poem ❤️

  120. Mark Jurel Sabalboro says:

    Inspiring❣

  121. Imee Lapuz says:

    nice poem thankyou for sharing.

  122. Mark Jurel Sabalboro says:

    Make me inspired❣

  123. Jolina May M. Nucum says:

    the poem was nice at the same time sad story.

  124. Mark Jurel Sabalboro says:

    Nice poem❤❣

  125. Trisha Joana S. Carlos says:

    This is a sad poem but meaningful.
    This poem is full of emotion, and its happening in real life.

  126. Mark Jurel Sabalboro says:

    This poem helped me how to appreciate more things❣

  127. Mark Jurel Sabalboro says:

    From this poem i got an idea how to appreciate more things arounds me

  128. Mark Jurel Sabalboro says:

    From this poem i got an idea

  129. Rhoanne M. Manio says:

    The poem gives different emotions. At first, I have felt the bliss of their heart because of their reciprocated love for each other until they ended up with an unexpected ending by unfriending the speaker. It is a sad poem that successfully gave a sad tone.

  130. Kim Tongol says:

    Such a beautiful piece with effective structure and nice rhythm. ❤

  131. Ace Velmar Medrano says:

    Unfriended from real life. Great Poem tho’ hope to see more ☺️

  132. June Manalili says:

    Many of us may relate our past experiences by reading this poem especially those who we call the “millennial ” ones. On the last part of the poem, it made me upset because i already experienced it before. But in the end, you will realize and learn what true love means. And that is when you let go of the person you love and value the most.

  133. This poem is nice , but it makes me sad
    i feel you sir:)

  134. Karylle Ciara Gaerlan says:

    This is so sad. I never want this kind of plot to happen in my life. I’m satisfied just being ‘friends’ with that person.

    This enlightened me that before deciding on things, think twice, thrice-many times to make sure that you are aware and ready for the consequences that may happen and if it’s worth trying because it might not end well as you least expected.

  135. The poem was expressed beautifully💖

  136. Karylle Ciara Gaerlan says:

    This is so sad. I never want this kind of plot to happen in my life. I’m satisfied just being a ‘friend’ to that person.

    This enlightened me that you should think twice, thrice-many times before making a decision and be aware and ready for the upcoming consequences because it may not end well as you least expected.

  137. Catherine Rose C. Gutierrez says:

    This kind of poem is an eye opener for everyone that we’re all in reality. Reality means not everything you want, you can get. Sometimes, the something that we really want can be the something that we can’t never ever get. People will come and go in our lives and all we can do is to accept the fact that no one will stay beside you except yourself but don’t give up on love, there’s always a perfect time in everything. It’s a nice poem, keep it up!

  138. Melanie G. Samaniego says:

    The poem is beautiful. Short but sweet☺️❤️💚

  139. Dong gabRiel says:

    Its flows really nice and its written so well, really good poem, great job!

  140. Angie Lyn E. Lobo says:

    I love your poem sir. It’s beautiful ❤️💖

  141. . I love this poem and it makes me sad!

  142. Catherine Manuit says:

    The poem is nice, thanks for sharing😍

  143. Christian Magtoto says:

    It was a great and gorgeous poem.

  144. Joyce Ann Pascua says:

    I Love This Poem😍😍😍

  145. Monica Ann Fabay says:

    This Poem is Very Nice!

  146. Rica Mae T. Alcantara says:

    A great poem indeed. 👏👏

  147. Jhoward Maniaul says:

    I really love this poem 💋

  148. Adrian De Guzman says:

    I love this poem🏵

  149. MHERLAN F.MAMANGUN says:

    The poem is wonderful

  150. Jhoward Maniaul says:

    I really love this poem 💋🏵

  151. Chrishine G.De Guzman says:

    The poem is beautiful

  152. Lyka Lane E. Castro says:

    The poem is good, thankyou for sharing

  153. Jane Paula Santos says:

    The poem is very nice! Its very relatable specially for us millenials… I thought its just all about relationship (romantic), but it can also about a true friendship.

  154. Lyka lane E. Castro says:

    This poem is amazing❣

  155. Rica mae T. Alcantara says:

    A great poem indeed👏👏 every people who are experiencing a one-sided love can relate to this poem💘

  156. Rica Mae Nasarro says:

    This poem is very nice 🏵

  157. Rica Mae gudoy says:

    The poem is good

  158. Mary Joy Bonito says:

    The poem is good

  159. Mary Joy Bonito says:

    The poem is sad in the end

  160. Aira ann manabat says:

    This poem is great! ❤

  161. I love this poem and it’s really inspiring.

  162. Jay Mark Payang Mercado says:

    The poem is good!

  163. This poem is great! ❤

  164. Amazing poem but its make me sad😑

  165. I really like this poem❤️

  166. I love this poem 😍

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