The misty morn shelters the rays
That falls upon the tranquil waters of the sea
The storks on the banks view the shrouded calm
The trees awaken with delight
To feel the softness of the breeze
Silently the creeping rays
Shine upon the waters gay
As the ripples frolic around
The waters suddenly come alive
While the fish dash to and fro
How far do these waters flow?
Its icy fingers caress the banks
Then recede and flow back again
The rhythm of life continues
Even as the sunlight dances upon its surface
But its wild density
Forbids it to penetrate into its interior
Myriads of secrets lie clutched within
Screened from the human eye
Men come… stand on its banks
To drink its serenity… then pass by
The fugitive waters now translucent, now opaque
Run deep… deep into the sea
Men come … men go
Looking beyond
Questions locked within
No answers without
The sea flows…
Life continues
The rhythmic jingle
Compels man… to come… to go
Even as the cadence
Casts a magical spell
~Shobha Diwakar
Jabalpur, India
It’s a very beautiful description of nature’s beauty. One can visualise what the poet is portraying through words. Keep it up!
An imagination at its peak performance!
No parallel to nature’s beauty!
The early morning mist
A blanket cover for sea and land
Renders lull and standstill!
Trees out of slumber
Embrace gentle breeze
Humans too fail not
To feel and love!
Sun’s rays become live
Waters begin to flow nice and happy
Fishes of all hues
Move here and there
Signify human activity
At its new peak!
Reverse occurrence –
Waters receding to deep sea
To rest after a day’s turbulence
Corresponds to return of humans
Back to rest and sleep
Only to get up early morning next
To the dutiful call of
The sun’s rays
Accompanied with milky mist!
This rhythmic routine
In its ELEGANCE
Continues forever!!!!
your poem is beautifully compose MrOKRVS ji
it is delightful to read your observations and comments
i do hope you will write some poems for poetry section not as comments but as a poet, which you rightly are
beautifully composed
Thanks for your compliment.
Your idea is good;
Not yet attempted!
please do attempt okrsji
we will like to read your compositions